Watching the piece I feel like it could have been trimmed down just a little bit in length as the pacing slows to a bit of a crawl right at when our protagonist as portrayed by Paul Cooper tries to conjure up some toast in his fire pit. I also feel like a bigger showcase of his toaster being defective could have pulled me in quicker to the plight, as it didn’t all seem to click together until after looking back on the film again. I thought originally, he just made the mistake of leaving the toast in too long.”
